Thomas: Ben:
I am the newbie I’ve been here longer than him
We are stuck in the maze
I don’t remember anything I remember everything
Are the memories true?
I don’t think I did anything wrong It’s all his fault
The creators put us here
People are blaming me He has to take the fall
The end is near
I can help them escape He is going to cause damage
Things will no longer be the same
He tried to kill me He deserves to die
The creators did this
He is out of his mind I only know the truth
Is the truth fake? Or real?
I wonder what is going I am going to die
to happen to him
The collar awaits
Where are they going I am going to be forced to stay out there to put him?
The maze awaits
I didn’t do anything! He put us here!
The creators did this
I liked how you showed Thomas defending himself from Ben. There was just one thing that I thought could be better. You used "The Creators did this" two times. Try to use a different phrase. Other than that, everything was great
ReplyDelete