"Black sky, she breathed deeply several times, tension crowding her heart. Ready for a fast departure, hurrying up, she made a sharp right. It was dark. Tumbling, breath catching, breaking a fence. Lights shining show a full side of a tall, muscular man on the other side. Waiting."
This poem is mainly about a girl being chased by an extra-terreseral person, making the poem scary and mysterious. The girl first starts off by being scared and having "tension crowding her heart". Then, she starts to run, "made a sharp right", and then fell and went "tumbling". While she was tumbling, she caught her breath and broke a fence. Then, that is when the shining lights show a full, one side of a man that is on the other side of the tree. He is waiting. I was hoping that by having that man there waiting, it would make the poem more scary.
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