"Every heart stopped beating, every breath was held, every eye was fixed immovably upon that man. Without the slightest hesitation, he went to the door on the right, and opened it."
Out came the most ferocious, brutal, blood-thirstiest tiger ever. The tiger moved slowly towards the man. Just as the tiger was about to devour the man the princess gave a signal to a good friend and there was a loud screech. The other door had opened, the door with the lady behind it had opened.
The savage creature quickly turned his head and locked his eyes on the lady. The lady then did the worst thing you could do when face to face with a wild animal. She screamed and started to run around the arena. It didn't take long for the tiger to catch up to her. He quickly took her life while the man stood there, astonished.
After the tiger did what he did to the lady, people captured the animal and put it in a cage. The king declared that the man was innocent and that the lady was guilty of something. He didn't know what for, but he knew she was guilty of something. The princess then came running towards the man delighted. She no longer had to worry about the man's death or the lady's cause of jealously towards her. She in fact got what she wanted one way or another.
Dear Siari, I think you should add more descriptive details, but everything else was good.
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